Side bar: do you people think this counts as poetry?
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ITs a shape poem. We did those in...grade 3 probably. It looks to me like all this says is "apfel" and "wurm" but maybe I need glasses.
I suppose its poetry in the way that its words in the form of art. But as for the actual words themelves, its not poetry.
All it does say is Apfel and Wurm. The joke is the Wurm is in the Apfel :S
I didn't say it was good, I said your name reminds me of it
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as a published poet, i say it is a poem

narg:
I realise that I have a past to break with--an accumulation of inertia, wrong, foolishness, rot, junk. A great need of clarification, of mindfulness, or rather, of no mind. A need to return to genuine practice, right effort. Need to push on the great doubt. Need for the spirit. Hang on to the clear light.
Thomas Merton
maybe it in some fukked up foreign tougne(sp). Leeman!!!!! Help!?!?