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The Apple Poem - leucetios - 09-20-2004

When I was in college I took a Creative Writing Poetry class. There was a poem in one of the books as an example of a "concrete form" poem. It stuck in my head (there's not much to it) and every time I read apple's name I think of this damned poem :angry:

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The Apple Poem - leucetios - 09-20-2004

Side bar: do you people think this counts as poetry?

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The Apple Poem - Pickle - 09-20-2004

ITs a shape poem. We did those in...grade 3 probably. It looks to me like all this says is "apfel" and "wurm" but maybe I need glasses.

I suppose its poetry in the way that its words in the form of art. But as for the actual words themelves, its not poetry.

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The Apple Poem - leucetios - 09-20-2004

All it does say is Apfel and Wurm. The joke is the Wurm is in the Apfel :S

I didn't say it was good, I said your name reminds me of it

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The Apple Poem - snarg - 09-20-2004

as a published poet, i say it is a poem

narg:

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The Apple Poem - VitaminE - 09-20-2004

maybe it in some fukked up foreign tougne(sp). Leeman!!!!! Help!?!?

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