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Poetry anyone?
#1

I wrote these awhile back and another thread on another board prompted me to dig them up...so, I figured I'd share here too
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Remember

Remember the night that we first met?
The lonely moon shed a tear of light,
That led me straight to you.

Remember the moment that we first spoke?
The hectic world just disappeared,
And all I heard was you.

Remember the strength of our first touch?
A single spark shot out a line,
And connected me to you.

Remember the passion of our first kiss?
Two velvet rose petals touched my lips,
That made me yearn for you.

Remember the rage of our first fight?
Razor lies and jealous fires,
Made me feel like I lost you.

But that has passed, and so, today,
You are creating new memories,
And all I can do, is....Remember.

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Crying In An Empty Bottle

Crying in an empty bottle, I thought I heard your voice,
Crying in an empty bottle, I knew I had no choice,
But to accept that you were gone, and probably gone for good,
Crying in an empty bottle, I found out where I stood.

Dialing half your number, I hung up half in fright,
Dialing half your number, I understood my plight,
That I could never call you again and ask about your day,
Dialing half your number, I didn't know what to say.

Seeing you on the street with him, my heart just broke in two,
Seeing you on the street with him, my mind told me I knew,
That you were happy now, that I have gone away,
Seeing you on the street with him, my day had turned to gray.

As you turned your head towards me, I thought I saw you smile,
As you turned your head towards me, I thought for a little while,
That you recognized who I was, and you were happy I was there,
As you turned your head towards me, I knew you didn't care.

Hearing our song on the radio, I wished that you were near,
Hearing our song on the radio, I thought of times of cheer,
When you held me as I held you, I thought we'd never part,
Hearing our song on the radio, I cried with all my heart.
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#2

Ohh gees they are so beautiful pusher .. They are sad and brought tears to my eyes . You have a wonderful gift for writing and you should try and get them published .

Totally awesome Big Grin
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#3

very nice work Pusher Big Grin
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#4

I read about two lines and barfed. Please go back to boobies. :lol:



If that's your own work then good job. B)

Jimmy - The old Hardcore Standard. :clap:
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#5

Quote:Dialing half your number,

Uhmm what do Half have with this to do??

Good work if it's your own....


Sassy, what do you think?

Why do I keep this cesspool alive?
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#6

Quote:
Quote:[b]
Dialing half your number,

Uhmm what do Half have with this to do??

Good work if it's your own....


Sassy, what do you think? [/b]
I have no idea what to say. Glad to hear it. Um, I think a lot of things. :whee:

Who said I had to make sense ?
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#7

Quote:Originally posted by leeman@Jun 12 2004, 09:03 AM
Quote:[b]
Dialing half your number,

Uhmm what do Half have with this to do??
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What I want to know is, which half of the number did they dial?????? :p
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#8

Quote:Originally posted by leeman@Jun 12 2004, 03:03 PM
Quote:[b]
Dialing half your number,

Uhmm what do Half have with this to do?? [/b]
you ever start to call someone...start pressing the numbers to...then, stop midway...that's what it is..

yes, these are my originals and thanks to those that appreciate them.
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