[Netboy Reid]

I fucked Jill with a bushel of collards and two boxes of Triscuits today. She bled some, but she still loves me........

I'm going to finger-fuck Zoe tomorrow and open her butt sores with anger and cock pressure.

[Devious]

Sounds like you need help... Mental help that is!

[Netboy Reid]

Originally posted by devious@Apr 10 2004, 12:22 AM
Sounds like you need help... Mental help that is!

Your avatar scares me, bucko. Please change it.

[Devious]

Originally posted by Netboy Reid+Apr 9 2004, 06:32 PM--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(Netboy Reid @ Apr 9 2004, 06:32 PM)</div><div class='quotemain'> <!--QuoteBegin-devious@Apr 10 2004, 12:22 AM
Sounds like you need help... Mental help that is!

Your avatar scares me, bucko. Please change it. [/b][/quote]
Not happening.. But you can take your balls out of your ass now!

[Devious]

HI MIONORTHREAT>>> I knew you would be fucking back!

[Netboy Reid]

Originally posted by devious+Apr 10 2004, 12:43 AM--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(devious @ Apr 10 2004, 12:43 AM)</div><div class='quotemain'>

Originally posted by Netboy Reid@Apr 9 2004, 06:32 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-devious@Apr 10 2004, 12:22 AM
[b] Sounds like you need help... Mental help that is!

Your avatar scares me, bucko. Please change it. [/b]

Not happening.. But you can take your balls out of your ass now! [/b][/quote]
If you keep talking to me like that, I will fight you.

[Netboy Reid]

Originally posted by devious@Apr 10 2004, 12:44 AM
HI MIONORTHREAT>>>&nbsp; I knew you would be fucking back!

Did you just call me a minor threat? I am far from a minor threat, suckmaster. I will fight you and you will cry.

[Devious]

iS THAT A THREAT.. AND i'M UP FOR A GOOD FIGHT...

[Netboy Reid]

Originally posted by devious@Apr 10 2004, 12:52 AM
iS THAT A THREAT.. AND i'M UP FOR A GOOD FIGHT...

You don't want to fight me. I've had 3 lessons in karate and I am going next week to register my hands as lethal weapons. Be afraid, be very afraid.

[mikeee]

welcome to insanetrain netboy reid you'll FIT right in i'm fucking sure of that.
ohh by the way don't try to be more INSANE then i am.

[Devious]

Originally posted by Netboy Reid+Apr 9 2004, 06:58 PM--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(Netboy Reid @ Apr 9 2004, 06:58 PM)</div><div class='quotemain'> <!--QuoteBegin-devious@Apr 10 2004, 12:52 AM
iS THAT A THREAT.. AND i'M UP FOR A GOOD FIGHT...

You don't want to fight me. I've had 3 lessons in karate and I am going next week to register my hands as lethal weapons. Be afraid, be very afraid. [/b][/quote]
Golden Gloved In boxing... My hands are registerd.. Plaus that ninga shit doen't mean a thing iN a street fight.. Co ahead and fucking try me.....

[lovelynoi]

can i join the fight? lol i can just kick it where it hurts lmao :jerry: :jerry:

[Jimmy]

I can fight.

[bit]

ah fuckit. fighting takes too much effort. Have a drinking contest instead. (now there's a way to prove your manliness :lol: )

Also, netboy.... if you're gonna give us a story, we need DETAILS!!!!!!!! c'mon man! don't leave me hangin'!

I fucked Jill with a bushel of collards and two boxes of Triscuits today. She bled some, but she still loves me........

I'm going to finger-fuck Zoe tomorrow and open her butt sores with anger and cock pressure.

1) Who are Jill and Zoe? How can we develope any attachment to them if we don't know them? I would care a lot more about the bleeding and butt sores this way.
2) How about a little background? Was there a reason you chose Triscuits anstead of Ritz? How did Zoe get her butt sores to start with?
3) When you say you're going to open up her sores with anger and cock pressure, that's a little vague. Are you going to use your anger to harness some psychic energy, or just get a mad-on and rip her open, not letting her hear completely?

Overall, I think I'm going to have to give this story a 62%. You didn't really put much effort into it, did you?
:dev: