People Here That Need To Get a Motherfucking Loaded Shotgun Discharged In Their Face - Printable Version

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People Here That Need To Get a Motherfucking Loaded Shotgun Discharged In Their Face - Dr. Lecter - 05-16-2005

In.

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People Here That Need To Get a Motherfucking Loaded Shotgun Discharged In Their Face - asshat - 05-16-2005

Tom, I hate to argue semantics here, but the whole title of this thread doesn't make any sense. If you were going to "discharge" a shotgun in someone's face, then by definition that shotgun would have to be "loaded". So to refer to it as having a "loaded" shotgun "dischraged" in their face is redundant. Also, refering to the shotgun as being a "motherfucker" is carrying your literary prose to the edge of extreme, as we all know how ridiculous that is. So aside from being too wordy to hold the viewer's interest, there are necessary changes that need to be made that I think you will find will enhance the effect that you were going for.

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People Here That Need To Get a Motherfucking Loaded Shotgun Discharged In Their Face - snarg - 05-16-2005

hahahahaahaha
asshat is just mad cause tom has put him in an group with snarg

:loool:

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